Thoughts on Open Letter Final Draft

After discussing with my peers and hearing their feedback I have decided that I want to speak more to a few things and alter the “who” I am talking to towards the end, Originally, I was talking to the “you” as the old me, which I still plan to do, however, towards the absolute end, I want to talk to the “you all” or the “we” because I have realized my message goes beyond the “you” and the “me,” but rather speaks to everyone and anyone who can relate to what I am writing about. Additionally, I only start talking about being alone at the very end, so I want to add more detail about how exactly I learned to be alone and what it was like during that transition. I realize, also, that I need to clarify the time frame of the piece, and make sure I am clear so that it makes sense by the end.