Friday Workshop 9/28

I am really glad I applied all the feedback my group members gave me for my final draft of the Open Letter. They suggested I had some more detail on the details of how I moved forward after the break up and I think by doing that it added a sense of “reality” into my letter that wasn’t there before. I also worked on the time differences that made it confusing to read my letter at first, I believe that now that I clarified the time frames, my letters flows far better than before and is more clear.